Much improved in clarity. The aesthetic too has some definite potential for your theme (using it in your "film"), while also offering a fresh take. Keep pushing the formal "framing" elements and typography so to make this visualization into a true graphic statement! The labels for sender and receiver are too far removed. Why those background diagonals?
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Much improved in clarity. The aesthetic too has some definite potential for your theme (using it in your "film"), while also offering a fresh take. Keep pushing the formal "framing" elements and typography so to make this visualization into a true graphic statement! The labels for sender and receiver are too far removed. Why those background diagonals?
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